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Inner Thoughts
Contributed by
buffo
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Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 09:38:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Broken thoughts i sit alone
No need for friends i have my mind
In emptiness i feel comfort
No more fear, agony, pain
I will stay here cold and alone and sane
You all play this game of friendship
When we all know you only care of your own benefit
I care to much for the world i live in
It seems to me its not a blessing but more of a sin,
This burden i bare is to much to hold
One shot to the head, pain is eased, im all alone...
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buffo
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2004-06-18 21:38:28]
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Re: Inner Thoughts
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by Archie on
Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 09:49:48 PM AEST
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| I wish I had more friends too. You are not alone unless you want to be. |
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Re: Inner Thoughts
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by RonMiller on
Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 09:56:25 PM AEST
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A cool write..I'm sure a lot of people can relate..
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Re: Inner Thoughts
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 10:40:52 PM AEST
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| some of what you said is truthful. very emotional. you seem like a strong person. |
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