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It happening
Contributed by
pyrofairyburning
on
Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 08:04:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Nothing's right anymore.
I don't know how to feel.
I'm no longer alone in an empty room.
The voices are back, screaming at me.
They disturb every infentesimal corner, invading whatever's left.
There's a burning... My head, myhands, my heart, my hallow stomach.
It all aches.
What If I just scream?
Right here right now while I'm in front of every one.
No one would see. No one would help.
They just offer to silence a guilty conceince. Guilty for letting this happen, almost encouraging it by not shutting up.
What do you people matter any more?
Here she is. My favored razor.
I know this makes me a whore.
Selling my body to relief, my mind to silence. Let it go.
First cut, second, third, silence.
Echos hush from the reverberations. Remember, when you walk in on the Shattered doll ,
Ensconced in her dark burgundy revelation, You could have at least understood.
It's fading, melting, dripping away.
Alas, Freedom.
Copyright ©
pyrofairyburning
... [
2004-06-18 20:04:19]
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Re: It happening
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 11:52:07 PM AEST
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wow that was a beautiful write lots of emotion running through I truly enjoye it...very sad however... but a lot to relate to...
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Re: It happening
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by holderofthestone on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 02:53:55 PM AEST
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nice job. a well written piece. I can relate. A+++
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Re: It happening
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 3rd August 2006 @ 04:34:33 PM AEST
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beautifully sad...i love dark poetry, because of all the honest and raw emotion in it...and this definitely has emotion...i love it
- Bethani - |
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Re: It happening
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by Ceres on
Sunday, 5th August 2007 @ 06:51:25 AM AEST
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its very raw, but beautiful at the same time... its like the words are screaming the different emotions... wonderful
much love ~ ceres |
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