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All Yours For The Taking
Contributed by
pyrofairyburning
on
Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 07:54:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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I thought I could trust you,
but your words were a lie.
I dont need excuses,
so dont even try.
You knew that I loved you,
I did from the start.
But not even night,
Is as black as your heart.
Your selfish,
Your greedy,
And a liar at that.
Your needy,
And concieted.
I hope for the worst,
For your life ever after
But I hope who ever loves you,
Only shows you disaster.
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pyrofairyburning
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2004-06-18 19:54:28] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: All Yours For The Taking
(User Rating: 1 ) by Living_In_My_Dream on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 01:13:28 PM AEST (User
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wow very good write a lot of anger a powerful piece....lots of emotion and feeling intertwined makes it a masterpiece!!!! keep it up keep it coming...
much love,
Dani
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