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She Cried
Contributed by
Sweetheart
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Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 07:42:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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She cried the day her first puppy died.
She sat and cried.
She cried the day she was married.
She laughed and cried.
She cried the day her baby was born.
She stared and cried.
She cried the day her father was killed.
She stood and cried.
She cried the day her mother got ill.
She waited and cried.
She cried the day she went to a nursing home.
She looked around her and cried.
She felt diffrently when the Lord spoke to her.
She fell to her knees, then wept.
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Re: She Cried
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by Rakerman1999 on
Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 08:40:30 PM AEST
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Tears are part of life arent they?
A very emotion filled write.
Well done
Roses
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Re: She Cried
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 10:59:37 PM AEST
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Life is full of tears, happy and sad. This is a very lovely write. A quick look at life and the responses it pulls from us.
Rita |
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Re: She Cried
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by mcloysoccer on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 05:11:20 PM AEST
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| Great Write, inspiring, and all in all an absolutely great poem. |
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Re: She Cried
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by mcloysoccer on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 05:11:21 PM AEST
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| Great Write, inspiring, and all in all an absolutely great poem. |
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Re: She Cried
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by mcloysoccer on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 05:13:42 PM AEST
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| Great Write, inspiring, and all in all an absolutely great poem. |
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Re: She Cried
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by mcloysoccer on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 05:13:43 PM AEST
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| Great Write, inspiring, and all in all an absolutely great poem. |
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Re: She Cried
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by mcloysoccer on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 05:13:50 PM AEST
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| Great Write, inspiring, and all in all an absolutely great poem. |
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Re: She Cried
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by mcloysoccer on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 05:13:51 PM AEST
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| Great Write, inspiring, and all in all an absolutely great poem. |
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Re: She Cried
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by mcloysoccer on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 05:14:55 PM AEST
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| Great Write, inspiring, and all in all an absolutely great poem. |
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Re: She Cried
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by mcloysoccer on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 05:14:56 PM AEST
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| Great Write, inspiring, and all in all an absolutely great poem. |
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Re: She Cried
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by mcloysoccer on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 05:15:02 PM AEST
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| Great Write, inspiring, and all in all an absolutely great poem. |
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Re: She Cried
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by mcloysoccer on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 05:15:02 PM AEST
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| Great Write, inspiring, and all in all an absolutely great poem. |
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Re: She Cried
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by mcloysoccer on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 05:15:05 PM AEST
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| Great Write, inspiring, and all in all an absolutely great poem. |
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Re: She Cried
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by mcloysoccer on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 05:15:06 PM AEST
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| Great Write, inspiring, and all in all an absolutely great poem. |
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Re: She Cried
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by mcloysoccer on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 05:15:29 PM AEST
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| Great Write, inspiring, and all in all an absolutely great poem. |
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Re: She Cried
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by mcloysoccer on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 05:15:30 PM AEST
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| Great Write, inspiring, and all in all an absolutely great poem. |
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Re: She Cried
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by Nazmythian on
Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 05:49:29 AM AEST
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I believe I liked this almost as much as mcloysoccer appeared to. A fantastic write. Much power in few words.
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Re: She Cried
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by clotti on
Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 01:08:30 PM AEST
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| i like the way tears can show a range of emotions you have shown that well here |
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