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Fairy Tale
Contributed by
Luinil
on
Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 07:25:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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Dragons, elves, horses with wings,
Magickal wizards and noblest kings
Music and dancing ‘round fiery blaze
Laughter-filled nights and tireless days
Faeries in hiding amid moonlit trees
Gnomes with their pipes, resting in lilies
Stem, root, and stone sharing deepest connection
Child, beast, and nature linked in perfection
Lord, lady and squire treated with reverence
Living and dying, honoring balance
Untainted love crossing eons of life
Roving oceans and lands to end its strife
Time steals children’s unveiled eyes
Logical tyranny and part of you dies
Reason blinds vision, sun never shines
You keep your reality; I’ll live in mine.
Copyright ©
Luinil
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2004-06-18 19:25:24]
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Re: Fairy Tale
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by Jackee_line on
Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 07:27:04 PM AEST
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Beautiful poem, you paint a pretty picture in my mind.
Well done |
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Re: Fairy Tale
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by Pyrofungus on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 05:26:41 PM AEST
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We all do have out own realitys...great write
please comment on mine too
Summer |
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Re: Fairy Tale
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by MLCstar on
Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 04:48:38 PM AEST
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| I love this one! I completely understand how you feel, put in a few more dark creatures and you have me! your word flow gets tripped up a couple of times but other than that, awsome. |
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Re: Fairy Tale
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by shorty_52 on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 06:00:32 PM AEST
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i like this. kinda funny and i love the mythical theme that u set for it. good write. keep up the good work.
~allyson~ |
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