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I dont understand

Contributed by SeXyDrAgOn on Friday, 18th October 2002 @ 10:15:00 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



some people say
its better that way
that he passed awway
that day
but i say
no

cause hes been gone
two months long
and its wrong

so maybe if he would have lived
he could have been a vegetable

quality over quantity right?

so give him his quality take mine away?
take his quantity, take him away?

atleast unresponsive i could have seen him
atleast i could have kissed
his cheek
held his hand
and
told him i loved him
that i would always miss him

i just dont understand
what made him the one
of hundreds of cars
on the highway
hundreds of people that crashed that night
what made him the one to go?

I just dont understand




Copyright © SeXyDrAgOn ... [ 2002-10-18 10:15:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: I dont understand (User Rating: 1 )
by Valerie_Pearson on Friday, 18th October 2002 @ 10:24:27 AM AEST
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Just to let you know, I still pray for you, death is not easy to get over, and I don't think no-one ever does, hold on, we are here with you, and I'm sure your angel watches too,


Re: I dont understand (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Friday, 18th October 2002 @ 01:50:36 PM AEST
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I know where youre coming from,It will be a year on the 25th that my mom passed & its still hard! God bless! Chrissy


Re: I dont understand (User Rating: 1 )
by arilyn on Thursday, 16th January 2003 @ 06:30:22 PM AEST
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Im sorry that a person who you loved died... my boyfriend just last year i know what your feeling and im terribly sorry.... my condolences ...

_arilyn


Re: I dont understand (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 18th August 2008 @ 12:20:52 PM AEST
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How sad this is, can anyone realy

understand the inequities of life in

any aspect? this is most touching.

hope to read more from you, your

writting is most compelling cause

of it's between the lines honesty.




ty 4 your read as well . . .



Ben . . .




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