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Impossible
Contributed by
Cole
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Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 06:09:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I heard about this fountain one time.
The people that drink from it,
They are destined to live forever.
I also heard about a place
Where people truly love
And can be wholly trusted.
It’s crazy how people talk
These days,
Like all these things
That could never happen,
Might some day
Come true.
Copyright ©
Cole
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2004-06-18 18:09:25]
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Re: Impossible
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by Rakerman1999 on
Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 08:43:02 PM AEST
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I felt a deep sadness in this one. Almost a resignation to fate.
Very well done
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Re: Impossible
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by Fionndruinne on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 06:45:08 PM AEST
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Oft it seems this way. I still search for it though. Perhaps it doesn't exist, but even so, those who keep searching come a little closer than those who don't search at all.
Maybe what we really need is a wellspring of hope and endurance, to keep it all up.
I like this poem, though. It expresses the feeling well.
Take care now.
Andrew |
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