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Let Me See You
Contributed by
iluvpencils
on
Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 05:34:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Everything seems based on
false hope
I'm about to fall
But I've come so close
All this time
it's been pushed aside,
The fact that I want
to see inside
I want to see
what's behind your mind
I want to see what I
will find inside your eyes
Everything is slipping out of reach
But I need to find you
I don't want to fall asleep
again
I need to be awake
I don't want to see
Those images I know m mind will make
Once again
I don't want to have to
catch my breath
Everytime my heart
leaves me behind
Copyright ©
iluvpencils
... [
2004-06-18 17:34:45]
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Re: Let Me See You
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by luckycharm on
Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 05:48:50 PM AEST
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| Your poem was very nice. Keep up the good work and keep writing.-luckycharm. |
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Re: Let Me See You
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by alasdaircairns on
Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 10:14:29 PM AEST
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| Hope you find what your looking for. Nice work |
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