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Honest love
Contributed by
TheLastStringCut
on
Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 04:47:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
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If I could
I would go back in time
To the day I first say you
And say 'hi'
If I could
I would go back in time
To a day long before
When you asked me
To be your pretend boyfriend
Why pretend?
If I could
I would go back in time
To a day I thought
I gathered enough courage
To ask you out
If I could
I would go back in time
To the day we first kissed
And kiss you longer
If I could
I would go back in time
To get you
Before anyone else
If I could
I would do these things
With all the honest love
That makes me
And I would not second-think
my choice to be with you
Over anyone else
And the mistakes I've made
I will take to my grave
If I could
I would go back in time
To a day long ago
And honestly say
I love you
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Re: Honest love
(User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on
Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 05:05:20 PM AEST
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| Hey Dude. What's Up? Nothing Much Down Here. I Just Wanted To Say Hello And How's Life Treating You? Mine's All right. I Could Say This Is Pretty Okay |
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Re: Honest love
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by alecfernadez on
Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 05:22:32 PM AEST
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| This was a very well written poem, and what you wanted to say was conveyed to perfection. Well done |
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Re: Honest love
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by pyrofairyburning on
Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 10:17:51 PM AEST
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| Touching. I do honestly say. lol. Hmmm, good write. I enjoyed. 8 rom ten, maybe. |
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