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carve emotion
Contributed by
rightwingbrknwing
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Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 04:40:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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you carve a love out of nothing and tears out of love
but who gave you your chizzle from which you can make emotion
and who gave you the power to train the heart in the art of devotion
why must there always be that seperation of you and your serf
but such should be expected when you controll this earth
but why shouldn't god controll all the rest
but why shouldn't the ground controll the trees
or the bird controll the nest
the heart controll the mind
and the sun at the eve of the next morn controll the west
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2004-06-18 16:40:35]
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Re: carve emotion
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by Luinil on
Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 07:32:28 PM AEST
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| really unique style... good writing * |
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Re: carve emotion
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by rightwingbrknwing on
Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 07:51:06 PM AEST
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| *****! I messed up on the beginning thing. I didn't finish my sentence "which read..." and it was suposed to be "which read He who carves tears" okay damnit! |
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Re: carve emotion
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 09:50:37 PM AEST
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| great write. |
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