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My Miracle
Contributed by
PunkRocker494
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Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 03:13:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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You're the girl who changed my life
Who came in and changed the light
You turned my world upside down
And turned it all around
I realized what I hadn't before
I realized who I was
I realized who I am not
It's amazing what one person does
The things they do and not get caught
My life was nothing but void
But with that void you toyed
You filled it with things I won't forget
You told me things I still don't get
This year has been very memorable
You were...well, my miracle
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PunkRocker494
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2004-06-18 15:13:33]
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Re: My Miracle
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by luckycharm on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 12:10:39 PM AEST
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| Your poem was very beautiful. Another great write!!.-luckycharm. |
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Re: My Miracle
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 12:47:09 PM AEST
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wow, that was a beautiful write...I can relate a lot to it...I have been many peoples miracles and I have had many miracles...its weird for me to say that but its the truth...Im happy you have expierienced the greatness of a miracle...great write lots of feeling and emotion, makes ait a powerful piece....keep it up...
much love,
Dani |
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