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Weakest Link
Contributed by
Hannah_Heaven
on
Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 03:01:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
HumorPoetry
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they are the other beings
the opposite sex
minds mysterious
almost distanced from ours
another world
venus and mars
its true what they say
we are very different
beauty yes
truth is
we dont know how their minds work
but they have us pretty sussed out
sensitve,moaning,caring,loving
broken easily by one word
BA BYE
but we get stronger
and learn from our mistakes
so that makes you lot
the weaker links
so instead of wasting your breath
and your time
with useless words'your all mine'
with one little sign
a gesture of our love
we give a symbol
a finger
so...
i guess
you are the weakest link
BA BYE!
Copyright ©
Hannah_Heaven
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2004-06-18 15:01:51] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Weakest Link
(User Rating: 1 ) by Essentially9 on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 11:35:33 PM AEST (User
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what a nice topic. very true and you brought it to its funnier side. |
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Re: Weakest Link
(User Rating: 1 ) by Falloftheangels on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 05:00:57 PM AEST (User
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Cute, funny and origional!!! It makes you smile. |
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