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Tears of Demise
Contributed by
williamdye
on
Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 12:29:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Reminiscing of a time stood still
Please watch me bleed
Piercing my torn skin to shreds
Slicing up and downward
Crying for you upon deafening ears
Blinding eyes of gloom and despair
Killing me is only the beginning
You said you adored my mind
You said you cherished me
You said you loved me
Remember the time I cried
You kissed my tears
You said you would never leave
Remember the time I cried
You laughed at my pain
Now I fall upon the cold dark earth
Matted with blood
Darkened by pure lament
Never to rise
Tears of demise I have shed
Copyright ©
williamdye
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2004-06-18 12:29:52]
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Re: Tears of Demise
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by shelby on
Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 02:26:39 PM AEST
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heartbreaking write here
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Re: Tears of Demise
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by 5MinutePoet on
Thursday, 21st February 2008 @ 08:13:41 AM AEST
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| So often the way that the morose mass chooses the more simple of statement in place of something truly deserving. I am not saying yours is either, although i would rate it higher than what lies atop your catagory |
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