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I Close My Eyes
Contributed by
AlyssaMarie
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Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 11:46:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I close my eyes to fall asleep,
I lie there contemplating the events just recent.
I see your face and hands as I try,
I try so hard to forget what happened.
You were so kind at first,
You were so polite and nice.
You are nothing good, only evil,
You took my life away from me.
We talked about school and others,
We watched a movie together.
We, I say it as if we were together,
We, is somthing will and would never have been.
Your hand brushed across my chest, my shirt still on,
Your hand moved across my back,as you give a massage.
Your words you say cut through me like glass.
Your presence by me becomes uncomfortable.
My innocence is taken,
My life is no more mine.
My pain is deep inside of me,
My protection, my shield is shattered.
Copyright ©
AlyssaMarie
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2004-06-18 11:46:35]
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Re: I Close My Eyes
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by Colleen on
Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 11:48:58 AM AEST
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| I am so sorry that this happened to you! I know it will be hard, but try to stay strong and look at the rest of your life in a positive perspective. |
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Re: I Close My Eyes
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by pixie on
Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 12:13:01 PM AEST
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this is awful, sorry you have had to go through this (((HUGS))) but time will heal your pain , takecare
pixie xx
you wrote it very well,might I add. |
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Re: I Close My Eyes
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by mickie on
Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 12:53:17 PM AEST
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if this really happened to you, i am so sorry. sometimes the things that happen to us are so cold and cruel. if you need someone to talk to, don't be shy to say something. i kinda have experience in this area. you can hit me here or at advisor26@hotmail.com
you take care!!! |
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Re: I Close My Eyes
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by JT on
Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 09:18:57 PM AEST
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i wont pretend to know how u feel. I just hope you can move forward from here.
keep the good writes coming.
-jt- |
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