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Dream Stealer
Contributed by
pixie
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Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 11:32:21 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I am the one who steals your dreams,
Replacing them with haunted screams,
Screams that chill your very soul,
Make your blood run ice cold.
All you see is death and pain,
Disturbing images that drive you insane,
Black dreams and nightmares,
Ghosts and demons that freeze your stare.
You are afraid to fall asleep,
Your pillow is sodden from where you weep,
Crying and praying for the horrors to cease,
But while I’m here you will get no peace.
I love to creep into your mind,
There are so many dreams to find,
And then pollute them full of fear,
Take every smile and add a sneer.
To witness your terror makes me laugh,
I’m taking you down this darkened path,
Leading you into a nightmare filled hell,
A place that you’ll get to know well.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2004-06-18 11:32:21]
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Re: Dream Stealer
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by Dusty on
Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 11:34:51 AM AEST
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| I enjoyed reading this, dark tho it was. It flowed well and I'll never deny that I enjoy something sinister once in awhile. Good Write. ~Dusty~ |
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Re: Dream Stealer
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by lostinmyself on
Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 11:35:56 AM AEST
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Wow, i have a dark poetry obsession. lol.
This is really good.
"All you see is death and pain,
Disturbing images that drive you insane,
Black dreams and nightmares,
Ghosts and demons that freeze your stare."
great lines.
Keep it up.
*hugs* phil xxx
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Re: Dream Stealer
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 11:40:29 AM AEST
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| really good..... :) |
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Re: Dream Stealer
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by mountainhigh on
Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 11:41:33 AM AEST
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Ode to the devil.
I liked this, thanks for sharing. |
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Re: Dream Stealer
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by freespirit on
Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 01:03:24 PM AEST
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well written I just hope that I never get nightmares like you do ha ha
well done |
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Re: Dream Stealer
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 02:22:55 PM AEST
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you have a dark mind -
I enjoyed this - nice work |
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Re: Dream Stealer
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by parkman on
Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 02:24:23 PM AEST
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| Excellent piece of darkness, haunting and chilling, nicely done |
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Re: Dream Stealer
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by lexxie on
Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 07:56:11 PM AEST
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i loved this one it was amazing beautiful rythem
l3xxi3 |
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Re: Dream Stealer
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by JT on
Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 09:07:41 PM AEST
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great write. I know this place well. maybe you can write a piece on how to get back.
keep em coming.
-jt- |
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Re: Dream Stealer
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by Rhei76 on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 12:02:33 PM AEST
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| very creative, I enjoyed. Good poem. |
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Re: Dream Stealer
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 12:03:57 AM AEST
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I enjoyed reading this one and you have so much talent. I read this twice it was just so good!
~Kris~ |
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