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Dying Soul
Contributed by
willow_tara72002
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Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 11:36:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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She Smiles
Pretending that shes fine
But inside her soul is slowly dying
She stays up for days in her room crying
She puts on and act
Pretending she's not being attack
By suicide and depression
She holds so many feelings and secrets inside
Shes drowning in an ocean of sadness that she hides
Everything inside is building up
Thats why she cries, and with a razor blade she'll cut
She sits everyday alone in her room
She writes poetry, Feelings come out of their tomb
As for now her soul is dying
Her bodys crying
Shes sick of trying
Theres a mask she keeps buying
So everyday she can lie the lie that has to be made
So she can say "this is me, Im happy, Im fine"
No one can hear her silent screams
She see's death even in her dreams
She wants to end it a certain way,
The way she wouldnt say
She promised me she would always stay
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Re: Dying Soul
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by pixie on
Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 06:09:27 AM AEST
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very touching and emotional poem, great write
pixie xx |
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Re: Dying Soul
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by JT on
Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 10:41:58 AM AEST
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another great write.
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Re: Dying Soul
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by luckycharm on
Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 06:37:47 PM AEST
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| I hope that you feel better and that things do work out for you. This poem was very deep and it got to the point. Good job!!.-luckycharm. |
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