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True blue
Contributed by
Fluffhead
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Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 11:30:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
MiscPoems
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I cry,
Bt they can't tell.
All they do is yell.
Sometimes I think its a dream,
But then they just scream.
I just want to give up.
I just want to run.
But then i remember,
Theres you.
My one true blue.
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Fluffhead
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2004-06-17 23:30:41] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: True blue
(User Rating: 1 ) by Living_In_My_Dream on
Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 02:15:34 AM AEST (User
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Beutifully done...I loved this lots of emotion and feeling it made it powerful...great write keep it up keep it coming...
read and comment my stuff fi you want Id love to hear what you think...
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Re: True blue
(User Rating: 1 ) by NoahsARK on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 09:13:24 PM AEST (User
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I like how you express your self and all of your feelings. Good Job!
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