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Only to be held in your arms...one last time
Contributed by
Living_In_My_Dream
on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 07:56:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I am wrong
you are right
I hate when we always fight
I'll give it all up
with the trace of my vain
I'll feel nothing
nothing but pain
you yell in anger
you hate the rush
you hate the danger
you don't say your sorry
you laugh in my face
your a disgrace
This isnt for me
but I still dont want my life to be
I slam the door
and stumble to the floor
I don't want to live anymore
I trace the vain with the blade
as I said I'd do
you still pounding on the door
I yell this is because of you
you break through
and you hesitated
you didnt know what to do
you grabbed some rags
picked me up
you threw me in the shower
to wash off all the blood
grabbed your lighter
burnt my wrist
to stop the bleeding
but thats not where
the blood was feeding
my heart was broken
my heart was slashed
you call 911
it's hard to understand what your saying
your mumbeling
while Im slowly decaying
I hear you, and your rumbeling
you pick me up once again
It seems I telepathically
reach you in your head
you then realize, it's over, I'm dead
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Living_In_My_Dream
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Re: Only to be held in your arms...one last time
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by Seans_Girl on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 08:32:46 PM AEST
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| Wow! That's really deep. I can picture it happening all in my head and its very sad. |
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Re: Only to be held in your arms...one last time
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by JT on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 09:02:40 PM AEST
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powerful stuff.
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Re: Only to be held in your arms...one last time
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by pyrofairyburning on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 09:36:20 PM AEST
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| Oh wow. This is yet another most excellent poem I've read today.I'm touched. Been there and survived, unfortunately. Now prozak's a good friend. Yippee. Good read, 9 from 10. |
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Re: Only to be held in your arms...one last time
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by holderofthestone on
Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 01:30:23 AM AEST
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| beautiful.... I love how the title ties in... sad but well written, your words are breath taking. A++++ |
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Re: Only to be held in your arms...one last time
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by SocialMisfit on
Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 01:54:31 AM AEST
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i feel like this so often its kinda wierd well try and keep ur head high stay proud!!
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Re: Only to be held in your arms...one last time
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by pixie on
Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 06:38:26 AM AEST
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this is so powerful , great poem
pixie xx |
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Re: Only to be held in your arms...one last time
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by Calista on
Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 11:54:45 AM AEST
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this was a very good piece, you wrote it in images...i can see the entire event unfold in my mind like a story being told. excellent
Calista |
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Re: Only to be held in your arms...one last time
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by xSlashXPrettyXSkinx on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 07:44:15 PM AEST
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Whoa. Deep. :)
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