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Last One Standing
Contributed by
hooray_its_jen
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Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 06:39:05 PM in AEST
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Everywhere I look
People shatter from within,
Falling far from righteousness
And falling into sin.
So stand your ground
When they've all given in
And be the last one standing.
I know it's not easy,
What you're going through
And I wish there was something
I could say to you.
But wherever you go
And whatever you do,
I hope you're the last one standing.
Rita, Keep the Lord closer than breath is to life and remember that we are never alone in this world. Keep the faith!
~Jenna
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Re: Last One Standing
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by apollo on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 06:48:42 PM AEST
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wonderful tribute to rita. this was good. she is a wonderful person and you've conveyed it quite well in this.
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Re: Last One Standing
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 09:52:22 PM AEST
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Jenna, what would I do without you, my sweet friend. I am printing this off to read everyday. Thank you so much for standing by me during this difficult time.
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Re: Last One Standing
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by SweetRhythm on
Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 05:04:02 AM AEST
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Lovely strengthening poem, how sweet to write such words for a friend. lovely. thank you for sharing.
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Re: Last One Standing
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by Stitch on
Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 09:40:18 PM AEST
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Jenna,
You are a wonderful testimony to the greatness of our Lord and God.
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Re: Last One Standing
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by Avarice_Riot on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 09:51:14 AM AEST
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| Rita deserves this tribute, she is an outstanding poet and more importantly an oustanding person, so full of warmth and wise words. Jenna, you're a sweetheart and a very good friend. |
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Re: Last One Standing
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 02:04:09 AM AEST
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truely sweet, written by a lovely lady to one:) hugs n' love nessa
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