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Everything About You

Contributed by TwEeK on Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 04:11:28 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



everything about you
makes me swoon
slowly drift
and float up in the clouds

everything from your smile
to the way your gental hands
go over
and caress my body

your love for me
fills my life with meaning
you are just so perfect to me
in every way

whenever i see you
i get excited
my pulse races
and butterfulys dart in my ribcage

just to be taken from you
kills me
just the thought
makes me shudder

never want to let you go
dont leave my side
i need you here beside me
your presence makes all of the hurt disappear

touching my leg
ever so lightly
pulling me towards you
untill we are closer than two ever can be

the butterflys move quickly
as you match your gaze into mine
my heart pounds
as i float on see-through air

we pull into a kiss
an exchange of our essance as we embrace
of our desire and love
as i melt away into your arms

everything about you
makes my body quiver
with excitment
drifting up to the open sky

everything about you turns me on
your just the one
the one for me
everything about you makes me breathe



Copyright © TwEeK ... [ 2004-06-17 16:11:28]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Everything About You (User Rating: 1 )
by Dizza_13 on Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 02:07:52 AM AEST
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Beautiful write. love is a very hard emotion to capture
you did it very well here.

dizza




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