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Breaking Up Love

Contributed by TwEeK on Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 03:53:49 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

here i am
screwed yet again
tired and dying within my own skin

why do they have to poke
why do they prod
they just cant see it

they are blind
blind to true love
they constantly bend it untill it breaks

bending the strenght of relationships
pulling at the ends
twisting and turning untill the lovers snap

why do slash at our open skin
ripped apart friendship and romance
try to break through and find the secrets within

you try to hide
and be ever so careful
as not to let them know your betrayal

but they poke and they prod
and eventually find out
and then cage you from the world and every other life form

these are the people who carried in your life
they are your parents
they our my parents

the people who want the best of it all for you
when they just cant help but ruin your life
try to trust them but you never cant

thank you for ruining my life
thank you for killing me inside
now i die thanks for your help

they took it all away
no more plesure from all of the little things that used to make you happy
no more love from the one you most adore

if this is way life is going to be then ill just leave and say goodbye

Copyright © TwEeK ... [ 2004-06-17 15:53:49]
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Re: Breaking Up Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Dizza_13 on Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 02:09:36 AM AEST
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a sad and touching write. parents can be this way
sometimes.

dizza

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