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My Mistake
Contributed by
Kie-Kie
on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 03:02:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Lonely
Miserable
I refuse to keep feeling this way
Happy
Unshaken
A face I put on so no one will know
I grab the blade
My tears are a river
To end my life
Is what I desire
I felt my blood
Coursing through my veins
My life force
My enemy
Slash
Sting
One cut now made
Scrape
Slice
Now several more
Up and down my arm
My blood now flows freely
Releasing my anger
Rescuing my soul from it's captivity
I want the pain to stop
I want my soul to fly
But my wounds seal quickly
My cuts are now dry
Desolate
Lost
What have I done?
Irrational
Idiotic
Why give up what I've got?
Crying on my bedside
How stupid I feel now
Wanting my life to end was wrong
Pain just makes you strong
But I gave up
I collapsed
I'm not strong or sure
My idiotic mistake could have been my last
Apathy
Hiding
Once again I stow my feelings away
Copyright ©
Kie-Kie
... [
2004-06-17 15:02:43]
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Re: My Mistake
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by pixie on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 03:05:56 PM AEST
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very strong and emtion filled poem, greatly written
pixie xx |
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Re: My Mistake
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by Rhei76 on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 10:05:40 PM AEST
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| Great poem. Kinda loud but very honest. I feel the same from time to time. I pray you're safe, so take care. God bless you. |
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