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If...
Contributed by
Kie-Kie
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Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 02:47:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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If I told you I liked you
Just as a friend
Would that make you smile?
Would you be happy?
If I told you I think about you
Maybe more than I should
Would that make you blush?
Would you be embarrassed?
If I told you I care
Just 'cause I do
Would that make you shocked?
Would you be surprised?
If I told you I loved you
With all of my heart
Would that make you cry?
Would you feel the same way?
Copyright ©
Kie-Kie
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2004-06-17 14:47:19]
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Re: If...
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 02:49:08 PM AEST
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| this is a very interesting poem and i liked it alot. |
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Re: If...
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 02:51:29 PM AEST
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I dont think it is repetative...kind of weird though I liked it keep it up
much love,
Dani |
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Re: If...
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by pixie on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 03:07:03 PM AEST
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i myself didnt find this repetetive, but very good, great flow,
pixie xx |
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