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Micheal
Contributed by
Kie-Kie
on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 02:41:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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Young and energetic
You were so full of life
Death came to you too soon
You left us
Grieving with eachother
On eachother's shoulder
Our tears fell harder than the rain that day
I know you're in a better place
But that doesn't make it better
You left me behind
Left me to grieve
You are at peace
But I must carry on
I miss you
Now that you're gone
And if I had known what was coming
I wouldn't have left your side
I would have never said what I did
But you'll never know how I felt
Now that you're gone
Copyright ©
Kie-Kie
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2004-06-17 14:41:31]
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Re: Micheal
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 02:48:34 PM AEST
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that was a sad write full of emotion and truth...I enjoyed it....I know the feeling of loosing people and I have lost so many close friends...but I will try and get stronger...
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Re: Micheal
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by pixie on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 03:09:19 PM AEST
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this is very sad, but you have written it with great talent
pixie xx |
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Re: Micheal
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by Stonedraider23 on
Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 12:10:24 AM AEST
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| good write i havent read many writes that i actually liked lol they keep me wanting more |
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