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my revenge
Contributed by
deadbloodyrose
on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 02:20:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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I walk up behind you and you turn around to see who it is
You turn your snobby head back around and stick your nose up in the air
From my pocket I pull my gleaming cold steel knife
It sparkles as I pull it out and I can see my reflection
My face is blank and emotionless but my eyes sparkle
I take the knife and hold it up to the middle of your back
I've stabbed you in the back so you won't do it anymore
Your high shriek rips through the air and breaks the silence
Your body falls to the floor and you lay in a lump
Your back is your turtle shell that's pouring out blood
I take the knife and cut your arm off at your shoulder
Your screams get louder and you cry so much harder
No one can hear you, no one can help, we're so far away
You utter your apologies but I had already given you your last chance
Now it's the time for my happiness, time for me to laugh last
Your body is laying in a puddle of blood by your cut off arm
Again I raise it but this time I start at your head and cut
The slice goes to the very bottom of your back
The blood gushes out all over and splashes on my face
I take the back of my hand and wipe my face clean
One last time while you're alive I cut your back apart
I see you take your last breath as your face is covered in tears
Finally your dead and you won't cause anyone any more pain
I slice your body in to teeny fine cubes and take your blood
I throw your meat in a skillet and blood in a wine glass
I turn on the stove and fry your body till its black
I place the plate on the floor and watch my dog eat you
I take a big gulp of your blood and drain the rest
I go back to my normal life and live everyday happier
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deadbloodyrose
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2004-06-17 14:20:51]
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Re: my revenge
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 02:40:08 PM AEST
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wow very angry It kept me on the edge of my seat sent chills up my spine...wow crazy write...but I enjoyed it however...I liked it
keep it up
much love,
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Re: my revenge
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 03:05:59 PM AEST
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| like dani said wow. i really like your stuff. you are the angriest and most honest person i know, and i love you for that |
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Re: my revenge
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by pixie on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 03:24:29 PM AEST
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great show of anger here, I reall like your work
pixie xx |
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Re: my revenge
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by apollo on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 06:43:56 PM AEST
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i laughed in aspicious (sp?) horror. this was amazing. you could write a book, a book of amazing stories like this. this was probably thee most scary stuff I have ever read but it is intense and amazing! i loved it!
brandon |
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