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letting go
Contributed by
vampyrekiss
on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 02:00:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
psychoticpoems
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I lie on the beach under a beautiful blue sky Thinking of her
as the breeze massages my soul
She broke my heart and left me for a guy
Now I find
my mind lies in a tormented hellhole
I had to unchain my heart and let her go
And that is why I had to do what I had to do I shot the ***** and killed the little ho
Then I shot and killed her lousy boyfriend too I shot her twenty times
and put a knife in her chest
Then I blew off her boyfriend's smirky,
ugly face
But before I did all that
I cut off her two fake breasts
There was blood and silicone
all over the place
And now I lie under a sun drenched blue sky As the massaging breeze continues to blow
I feel calm and at ease
and I think I know why
Because I killed the
dumb *****y little ho
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Re: letting go
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 02:05:16 PM AEST
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wow, lot of emotion put into this one....and tons of anger...well I hope you really didnt do these things lol...HOPEFULLY cuz that would suck if you got caught and like you couldpnt post you poems well yeah I liked this write...keep it up keep it coming
read and comment my stuff if you want Id love to hear what you think,
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Re: letting go
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by pixie on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 03:30:21 PM AEST
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great use of anger here, well done
pixie xx |
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