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Song of strength
Contributed by
broken-glass
on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 12:37:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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As I stare towards the mirror,
I examine how I've changed, moulded,
progressed...
And I think of how powerful five years can be.
And I remember the very first time I was attacked through words...
I had no comebacks, no answers.
I now stand stronger, and I feel closer to showing them all how I feel inside.
Like a Cozmic swirl of feelings,
how proud I am of me.
All I've learnt and earnt
and who I've come to be.
No longer will I let them hold me down,
no longer will I hide.
One day I will show the world,
who I truly am
inside.
Copyright ©
broken-glass
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2004-06-17 12:37:26]
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Re: Song of strength
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by hooray_its_jen on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 12:48:43 PM AEST
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I enjoyed this one in particular. Very nice! You have a lot of talent and I'm sad I won't be hearing anymore of your poetry :'(
Blessings
Love, Jenna |
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Re: Song of strength
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by bluedragonfly on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 01:16:36 PM AEST
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Very good, I really enjoyed this one. Sorry u r leaving. Although, change is good.
Peace b w/ u.
Lonnie |
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Re: Song of strength
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by pixie on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 03:41:22 PM AEST
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great poem, sorry to hear you are leaving as I will not be able to enjoy any nore of your work.
pixie xx
all the best for the future |
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Re: Song of strength
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 08:13:07 PM AEST
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Sorry to hear you're leaving us, but stand strong, stand firm, and godspeed!!! Nice write btw!
Angel always....joni |
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