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At My Own Mandate
Contributed by
ginsdance
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Thursday, 17th October 2002 @ 04:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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No one makes my heart quake
And tremble, quite like him,
And no one else can make me wonder
About the places my heart has been,
I don't want it to be tarnished,
I want to be perfect in his love,
And I know that he doesn't expect it,
So I want it just because.
Maybe that's why I'm so confused,
And why my heart still aches,
Because until I can be the princess for prince charming,
I'll be alone, at my own mandate....
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Re: At My Own Mandate
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Friday, 18th October 2002 @ 05:28:05 AM AEST
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| great write Gindance, have you looked in the mirror lately, seems to me I see a princess |
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Re: At My Own Mandate
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by Chicken on
Friday, 18th October 2002 @ 08:38:44 AM AEST
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| great write |
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Re: At My Own Mandate
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by MisterRight on
Saturday, 19th October 2002 @ 07:17:29 AM AEST
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This is really an excellent poem Gin. One question though, is it about you or did you write this with my situation in mind? I thought it was about you until I read the description (for some reason I always read that after I've read a poem). If it's about you... you are a princess, I may not know you all that well, but from what I do... any prince would be lucky to have you. Just keep looking for you prince charming.
Wonderful!
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Re: At My Own Mandate
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by ginsdance on
Saturday, 19th October 2002 @ 11:54:34 AM AEST
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It was for me... and for you... and you would be surprised how so many princesses are in rags until they get out of high school... I'll find my prince sooner or later... but really, if you think about it... that could be her prob... thinking that she's not good enough for you because so many guys have made her feel worthless in the past... hmm??? Something to think about at least...
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