|
Menu
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
No Reviews?!
Contributed by
Wolfareen
on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 06:07:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
|
Why have I no reviews?
Are my poems not that good?
Is someone slagging me off?
Has my name been dragged through mud?
So maybe I'm exaggerating,
Maybe I do have a few,
But I want to be a greedy cow,
I want some that are new.
Everyday I sit and check,
Thinking maybe I have some more,
But the same numbers haunt me,
It's getting to be a bore.
So please look at my poems,
See what you think, go on,
They're not as bad as this one, promise!
A little review? Just one?
Copyright ©
Wolfareen
... [
2004-06-17 06:07:53] (Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment. That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: No Reviews?!
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 06:16:54 AM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
This is cute...and who knows...it may just work...
Jenni |
|
|
Re: No Reviews?!
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 07:21:19 AM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Of course many on this sight feel the same way as you do- It is an awesome opportunity to have your work reviewed and critiqued, so you hunger for more news!
Clever, and I hope it gets people commenting! |
|
|
Re: No Reviews?!
(User Rating: 1 ) by Essentially9 on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 09:46:29 PM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
excellent write. dont write for people write for yourself. because youll only start to try and please them and have them control what you express. i gave you my just one. =] |
|
|
|