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DON'T KNOW BUT
Contributed by
emystar
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Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 05:34:53 AM in AEST
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Was talking 'bout his dreams
n all them good things.
Was about looking for love.
You know, like awesome doves?
Don't know but be glad
2 help you look like mad.
Don''t know, it's elluded me too.
Maybe we can find it true.
Think got real close at times
but key, never did find.
Always thought if was here
wouldn't ever let it get away, dear.
Luv should meld hearts, souls.
Live past anything, You know?
Gets scarry at times
but when it comes, it's mine.
by
Emy Star
Copyright © Emy Star
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emystar
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Re: DON'T KNOW BUT
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 05:42:37 AM AEST
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oooh awesome emy!
I really love the flow and how it all melts together...
it sounds so natural...
oh and i LOVE the first verse and in particular,
the line:
"you know, like awesome doves?"
I really liek the comparison made there
and how it's used in the simile...
oooh emy this poem is sooo cool!!!
I love it!
Keep 'em coming!
_.:'~Katie~':._ |
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Re: DON'T KNOW BUT
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by lovingcritters on
Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 01:55:08 AM AEST
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Little Emy,
What a ominious picture.......a staircase to Heaven......Heavenly Love.......this was an especially good loving write by you.
I like the way you write my dear.
Keep them coming.....they are always welcome here.
love
mom |
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Re: DON'T KNOW BUT
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by Rhei76 on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 11:29:15 AM AEST
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Nice, I think this is a beautiful poem.
Luv should melt hearts, souls
Live past anything, you know
gets scarry at times
But when it come, it's mine
Are just awsome lines. God bess you. Take care. Peace out. |
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Re: DON'T KNOW BUT
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by rugby_player on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 12:08:18 AM AEST
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| This poem rocks..I loved it. It makes one think about love.......and how hard it is to attain these days great job |
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Re: DON'T KNOW BUT
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 08:40:02 AM AEST
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Emy Star,
Beautiful soothing picture, not sure where you found that one but it went wonderful with your lovely write, take care Val |
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Re: DON'T KNOW BUT
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by venkat on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 12:09:20 AM AEST
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| Wow Emy..you have built up steps to beautiful heaven..correct..love should meld hearts and souls. .. venkat |
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Re: DON'T KNOW BUT
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by Silent-No-More on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 12:13:17 AM AEST
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Lovely! Trust that love will find you... it has a funny way of sneaking up on your sometimes!
SNM |
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Re: DON'T KNOW BUT
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 01:25:21 AM AEST
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sweet write emy girl! very pretty picture too:) hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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Re: DON'T KNOW BUT
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 03:55:19 AM AEST
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beutiful song lots of feeling and emotion I loved it...very touching!
much love,
Dani |
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Re: DON'T KNOW BUT
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 06:22:37 AM AEST
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Oh Emy grrlfriend....this is an awesome write..and the pic is just so beautiful....
Hugs
Jenni |
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