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''Suicide!''
Contributed by
srugglingyoungster
on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 04:52:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Again do the words
"Suicide!" ring in my ears,
like a loud humming,
it runs through my mind.
I sit all alone
and think to myself.
The constant phrase,
"I've gone mad!"
repeats itself.
My whole world is blah,
me vision is burry,
every single picture is fuzzy.
just now i blacked out.
I fall to the floor,
my mind not quite clear,
but the word, "Suicide!"
happily rings in my ears.
I slowly start shaking,
now i cant stop.
"Good God, someone kill me,"
i yell as my heartbeat
quickly drops.
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srugglingyoungster
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2004-06-17 04:52:30]
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Re: ''Suicide!''
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 05:23:40 AM AEST
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*shudder*
this one's scary!
but i like the flow a lot
and how it was short and to the point...
great write i reckon!!
keep it up!!!
luv,
Katie |
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Re: ''Suicide!''
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by pixie on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 07:30:18 AM AEST
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wow this is powerful and full of emotion,
pixie xx |
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