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The person I call...LIFE
Contributed by
Living_In_My_Dream
on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 02:57:45 AM in AEST
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you hold me down
with cruel despite
something I'm not
able to fight
you make me cry
my thousand tears a day
all because of those things
you cause people to say
please tell me
this isnt reality
But I feel so isolated
not at all free
it's nothing I choose to be
you just wont allow
me to be me
I'll end you now
I just have to figure out how
I've tried so many times
when you got rough
made everything
for me so tough
I speak to you now
The person I call...LIFE
I'll murder you now
with my good friend knife...
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Living_In_My_Dream
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2004-06-17 02:57:45]
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Re: The person I call...LIFE
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by pixie on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 07:22:07 AM AEST
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very dark , great write
pixie xx |
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Re: The person I call...LIFE
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by hannahbanana on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 02:07:05 PM AEST
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| very powerful write. i really liked this. very strong ppoem. thank you for your kind comments. i will definitely keep up with your posts. excellent* |
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Re: The person I call...LIFE
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by deadbloodyrose on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 03:41:09 PM AEST
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| i like this one too.. it has a lot of emotion in it.. AMI JO |
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Re: The person I call...LIFE
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by JT on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 09:19:19 PM AEST
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strong write. the words flow easily and emotions wash through your writing. great stuff.
-jt- |
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Re: The person I call...LIFE
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by holderofthestone on
Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 01:24:28 AM AEST
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please tell me
this isnt reality
But I feel so isolated
not at all free-- this is how I feel right now. great poem , deep emotions. I as always relate well with you here. A++++ well done |
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Re: The person I call...LIFE
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by PunkRocker494 on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 01:36:13 PM AEST
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| This one is kinda funny. I'd like to do the same thing to my person. Very interesting. I love all of your work so far. Keep them coming. |
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Re: The person I call...LIFE
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by xSlashXPrettyXSkinx on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 07:47:36 PM AEST
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Life is harsh. :-( PLEASE dont ever surender. If you need to talk, PM me.
Lindsey
PS. The poem was awesome. |
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