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Only Time
Contributed by
faith_my_eyes
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Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 11:43:07 PM in AEST
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My tears come when I least expect
When I think my life is going fine
Then from my eyes springs a fount
The does not seem to run dry
My throat chokes with each fresh wave of tears
Wondering where the time has gone since you died
And wondering if a time will ever be
That I will see you again
How willing I would be to give up my earthly life
So you could have another chance to be made free
But only time will answer my questions
Maybe at the last trumpet
When the dead shall rise
Or maybe it will be when I cross the other side
Either way only time will tell
If I will see you
In eternity.
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Re: Only Time
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by Cole on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 11:53:06 PM AEST
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| Thankyou for commenting on my poem Inside . I wanted to check out your work as well, and I was surprised to see how many poems you have posted on this site. I read this one because nobody else had, and I might say it was amazing. It flows really well. It's the best I've read on this site so far. |
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Re: Only Time
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by Seans_Girl on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 11:57:40 PM AEST
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| Very sad poem. Sorry about your dad. |
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Re: Only Time
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by Fionndruinne on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 12:04:41 AM AEST
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Beautiful and heartfelt. And very well-expressed. I pray you will have strength to hope and carry on.
Blessings.
Andrew |
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Re: Only Time
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 04:51:55 PM AEST
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absolutely beautiful:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Only Time
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 06:57:28 PM AEST
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Oh Blondie...I am so sorry for your loss... I hope you have found the strength you need to carry on.... I am sure you will meet again..
This is a very good write...
Jenni |
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Re: Only Time
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by Wachumiri on
Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 05:04:01 PM AEST
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Lots of unanswered questions will no longer remain so. It's amazing when you think of ho wlittle time we have on earth, and so many people to touch with our lives. It's a powerfull mission.
Take care sis.
David
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Re: Only Time
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by eatfresh22 on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 07:23:16 PM AEST
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Full of emotion. I especially liked the first line. It seems to be that way in my life too. Satan sure likes to TRY to steal our joy. Good thing you are a strong girl. Good luck in future battles, and don't forget you have an army of friends, not to mention a leader who has never lost. NIcely written poem!
~Carrie~ |
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Re: Only Time
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by blueheart on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 10:36:34 PM AEST
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Some things happen and we never really understand them, but you've got to believe that God is in control and no matter how bad the situation He still knows whats best for us.
Then from my eyes springs a fount
I loved that line, very emotional piece.
Sorry for your loss and I hope you find the will and strength to geth through it. :) |
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Re: Only Time
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Monday, 10th October 2005 @ 12:22:29 AM AEST
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Oh Emily I'm so sorry for the loss of ur father. You shall one day meet again. My heart cried with this write.
*heartfelt hugs 4 you*
Sue |
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