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A Daughter's Burden
Contributed by
discantbelife
on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 10:04:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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A daughter's burden,
Don't you see your child is hurting.
She dying for you to pay her just a little attention,
A heart that needs some mending.
A daughters burden,
She has been secretly cutting herself
Just so that she can feel like she controls something.
He broke her heart again today,
Her burden is burdening her more than she can say,
So she took her own burdening away, by killing herself today.
If you weren't so busying not paying attention,
Your daughter's burden you would have been able to relief
Now your daughter's burden is your sad grief.
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discantbelife
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2004-06-16 22:04:47]
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Re: A Daughter's Burden
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by Katie2008 on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 10:07:32 PM AEST
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| I can totally relate to the daughter in this poem, I like it a lot. I wish our mothers did take out a little more time out of their days to pay us a little attention. |
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Re: A Daughter's Burden
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by faith_my_eyes on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 10:47:39 PM AEST
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good, thought-provoking piece.. if people could learn to commnunicate better, then we wouldn't have so many dysfunctional families
God bless
Emily |
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Re: A Daughter's Burden
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by Trisha on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 11:19:38 PM AEST
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| Sad I Guess Mothers Are Busy But They Needs Time for The Daughters But Not Mind. |
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Re: A Daughter's Burden
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by pixie on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 07:04:35 AM AEST
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wow, very powerful and sad... great write
pixie xx |
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