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You'll Understand
Contributed by
Trisha
on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 09:55:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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You'll Understand When
You Get To Be My Age.
You Always Think I Am
Picking Him Over You But
It's Not Like That.I Take
Things As They Come He
Happen To Come My Way
As I Wanted Him Too. You'll
understand When You Get
To Be My Age. Your Different
From Him His Different From
You. He Maybe Your Brother
I Can't Share Anything We Do
It's Private Your his Sister He
Understands. I Am Always Around
When You Need A Friend. Everyone
Has A Different Place
In My Heart Where No One Should
Feel Unloved.
Copyright ©
Trisha
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2004-06-16 21:55:13]
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Re: You'll Understand
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 10:22:41 PM AEST
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I like the meaning behind this poem very much. But its lack of structure makes it hard to read. Line breaks and spelling are important in a poem for the real meaning to get across.
Smiles,
Rita |
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Re: You'll Understand
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by recklessguy on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 02:29:47 AM AEST
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| wonderful nice write |
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Re: You'll Understand
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by Justalady on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 05:14:01 PM AEST
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Everyone
Has A Different Place
In My Heart Where No One Should
Feel Unloved.
I find this the most understandable verse. I too found it a little hard to read but several attempts later I did find it easier. In fact, I love the last verse, touches my heart also. Hugs, June |
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Re: You'll Understand
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by Broken_Skin on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 05:22:59 AM AEST
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| I like your style, you dont try to rhyme random things just to make it seem like a typical poem, i liked this x |
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Re: You'll Understand
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 12:34:13 AM AEST
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very sweet:) hugs n' love nessa
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