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the sullen child

Contributed by InnerBeautyQueen on Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 09:36:10 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

eyes like ice, watery blue, with a frozen stare
the windows to the soul inside
cold and morbid, absent of life
free from feeling, alone

hair like golden silk, gleaming and light
the curls forced out, made to be straight
words would slide off, so nothing could touch
her porcelain face

slender and small, her limbs looked so fragile
her skirt was torn and dirty
her blouse was missing buttons
her body stained with congealed blood

she didn’t walk, she floated and stalked
she had more daggers and knives than space
she beamed from a light shining from some other place
to looked to solid to be alive

her wings were black
she looked so young to be so old
she was two hundred though she looked five
stained and tainted by too hard a life

her halo died so long ago
some now doubt its original existence
no one remembers her beautiful smile
so now she’s become the sullen child

Copyright Â© InnerBeautyQueen ... [ 2004-06-16 21:36:10]
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Re: the sullen child (User Rating: 1 )
by DerPinguin44 on Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 09:40:21 PM AEST
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This one made me stop and say, "WHOA!"
Good job, actually, FIVE OUT OF FIVE!

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