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Superman
Contributed by
strange_lindsey
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Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 09:18:20 PM in AEST
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Words that echo through my soul
"I hope you find your Superman"
Words that taught me what I know
"Too bad you're beautiful"
S ave me from my broken self esteem-
U nderstand what you meant to me,
P erfection is a word I'll never utter again-
E ven when I know it's here,
R emembering when 'I Loved You'-
M ade everything so much better,
A nd dismissed all the bitter after tastes-
N ow it's time to forget.
~She knew he was the closest she could get
He thought it all was just a joke
She told him all the things he needed to hear
He gave her up- it was her pride that broke.~
Even SUPERMAN can't save the day
What makes me think anyone can?
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2004-06-16 21:18:20]
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Re: Superman
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 10:05:00 PM AEST
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ohh sweetie, i felt like that too more than once as you well know, and just five months ago too, each day youll get stronger, its his loss not yours, you are beautiful not only outside but on the inside where it counts:) great write here, so heartfelt and moving! hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Superman
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by brigitte7735 on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 10:21:54 PM AEST
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I am constantly astounded at how amazing you are
Always,
Vanessa ( 090404 ) |
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Re: Superman
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 10:35:13 PM AEST
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Sweetie, there is no superman. There are those we build up in our minds and those that fit the description of what we think we are looking for, but not one of them can fulfill all your dreams. Only you can and then you find one that can enhance your dreams. Love but only after you learn to love yourself also.
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Re: Superman
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 05:02:41 AM AEST
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I like the didactive part, and of course, the rest is your honesty and candour, at its captivating best.
Thanks for sharing these thoughts, Lindsey. |
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