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TaKe HeR HoMe
Contributed by
strange_lindsey
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Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 08:56:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Isolated occassion
Quiet invasion
She hoped for a prayer
That could take her there,
~To Take Her Home~
Contemplated suicide
Loneliness in struggling pride
She watched them fall apart
Learned to trust her heart,
~To Take Her Home~
Unimaginable existance
Spiteful resistance
She wished to see the light
That gave way to night,
~To Take Her Home~
Quiet desperation
Hidden asperation
She found what she was looking for
Taught herself to value more,
~To Take Her Home~
He promised her happiness
She went weak with this last kiss
Forever broke her heart
Forever tore her apart,
~And he dropped her off at home~
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2004-06-16 20:56:59]
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Re: TaKe HeR HoMe
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by Princesaazul16 on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 09:06:23 PM AEST
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Beautiful!! So strong and deep..I loved it! Keep up the good work! Hope to hear more!
~Stace~ |
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Re: TaKe HeR HoMe
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 09:52:49 PM AEST
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so well written, but sooo sad, this poem tugged at my heart....... hugs n' love nessa
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Re: TaKe HeR HoMe
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by brigitte7735 on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 10:19:07 PM AEST
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This is sensationally heartbreaking and so dripping with originality
Always,
Vanessa ( 090404 ) |
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Re: TaKe HeR HoMe
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 03:57:01 AM AEST
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I like the repetition of the title here, Lindsey. This was full of melancholy, but showed a great deal of talent, too.
Keep on writing. |
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Re: TaKe HeR HoMe
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by pixie on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 06:27:17 AM AEST
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very well written, great write
pixie xx |
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Re: TaKe HeR HoMe
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 05:25:29 PM AEST
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I liked this, original in its format
and tragic
PFR |
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