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this innocence
Contributed by
InnerBeautyQueen
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Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 08:52:36 PM in AEST
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Torn is this innocence
that holds me through the dark
as I’m silently weeping
for the demon in the closet
he’s left new sores upon me
... as if the scars just weren’t enough...
So I’m mopping up the gore
there seems to be so much
to get from ‘just a dream’
from something that isn’t real
but this world is an incubus
... it’s this world kills me...
And so much of you is frightening me
for so much of you isn’t real
and so much of you makes me ashamed
I’m surprised that I can feel
please tell me I can feel
... because if this isn't real...
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InnerBeautyQueen
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2004-06-16 20:52:36]
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Re: this innocence
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by Keila on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 09:19:13 PM AEST
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| it feels sad and alone, i think you need a hug! |
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Re: this innocence
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 09:58:02 PM AEST
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Hmm different, but still heart wrenching, it seems if there is still more left unsaid with the way it ends.
But it was still an excellent write. |
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Re: this innocence
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by InnerBeautyQueen on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 10:01:43 PM AEST
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| err! iknow! i had to leave out the last bit because my poem would be censored out... *tears* |
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Re: this innocence
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by blueheart on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 11:08:47 PM AEST
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| I liked this a lot. Written very creatively . Good job!! :) |
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Re: this innocence
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by pixie on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 06:26:15 AM AEST
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this is brialliantly written, I am sorry for your pain,
pixie xx |
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