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Journal
Contributed by
Colleen
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Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 08:30:53 PM in AEST
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Reading through my journal late at night
Something about my life just doesn't seem right
It seems like I'm never truthfully happy
I know this is not how I want life to be
The journal doesn't lie, I'm afraid
It tells of my mother's secret room raid
How can I be happy when my mom doesn't trust me
She sees someone who's not me
Such sad stories it does tell
Living in this distorted hell
Mother always yelling
When will I be strong and start rebelling
Degrading words written down, mixed with tears
What could I have possibly done so wrong in fourteen years
I feel like I just need a new life
I'll dismiss this one with a slash of a knife
Copyright ©
Colleen
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2004-06-16 20:30:53]
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Re: Journal
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by Esther on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 08:40:15 PM AEST
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great write i dont keep a diary but i can totally relate. life always seems soo bad-but if we really took the time to look we'd see that there's also toons of goodness
good luck in life
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Re: Journal
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by InnerBeautyQueen on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 08:54:52 PM AEST
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Re: Journal
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by TheVoice on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 09:39:31 PM AEST
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colleen,
super write. look deeper before you blame yourself. hang in there my friend. lean on your friends for your extra stregnth. we are here for you.........
hugs,
the voice
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