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Suicide
Contributed by
Qdawg
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Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 07:46:56 PM in AEST
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People slit their wrists,
and when asked why,
they say to fulfill a wish,
that one wish is to die.
To others they seem crazy and mad,
but not to me
in my eyes they're lonely and sad,
but, oh no, that couldn't be.
I know how they feel,
I know what goes on inside their heads,
I know how it feels
to wish to be dead.
So many nights
I've thought that same thought
to see the "light"
death I would have bought.
It hurts so deep
a pain that can't be cured
not even sleep
can help for sure.
But who can dream
when life is so bad
they only wake others with their screams.
So, are they crazy and mad?
It's a disease
and it takes so many lives
they're begging, please,
they want to stay alive.
Suicide
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Qdawg
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2004-06-16 19:46:56]
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Re: Suicide
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by Princesaazul16 on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 08:47:50 PM AEST
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I liked this poem a lot...maybe because it touched home.. Well I just wanted to say..nice job on the poem and keep up the good work. I hope to hear more.
~Stace~ |
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Re: Suicide
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by DragonLuvSong on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 09:26:04 PM AEST
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| i liked this poem, it speaks a message that people can understand; and its written well, good |
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Re: Suicide
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by pixie on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 06:23:03 AM AEST
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good poem, well worded
pixie xx |
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