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The Love That Went Wrong
Contributed by
Justalady
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Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 07:36:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
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She sat at her kitchen table, staring at the rain...
each falling drop added more fuel to the pain.
Picking up a pen, she commenced to write a letter,
one word at a time...hoping to feel better.
But, half-way through she stopped, words would not come,
her soul was feeling empty...that place they come from.
How did she allow this hurt, she was way too smart
to allow at her age, an affair of the heart?
Youth had long since left, there was silver in her hair,
yet her heart longed for someone, a life to help share.
She opened the door, let a stranger come inside
allowing emotions, not wisdom...on a path that would collide.
She again cried some tears, though they now were becoming less,
it was time to finish the letter, put it between pages of book to press.
She will never send it...it's words no one will ever find,
about the stranger's charm, that left her completely blind.
No one will ever see, the heart that in half broke,
or hear of the words...she believed when spoke.
They will see her smile, when all the tears are gone,
no one will ever know, of a love that went wrong.
Author: June E. Miller
3/20/2003
Copyright ©
Justalady
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2004-06-16 19:36:01]
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Re: The Love That Went Wrong
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by Trisha on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 07:49:23 PM AEST
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| This Was Good. |
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Re: The Love That Went Wrong
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by Seans_Girl on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 08:09:21 PM AEST
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| Very sad but well written. |
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Re: The Love That Went Wrong
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 08:13:48 PM AEST
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beautifully sad june, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: The Love That Went Wrong
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by Princesaazul16 on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 08:51:37 PM AEST
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Beautiful! I loved it! Keep up the good work
~Stace~ |
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Re: The Love That Went Wrong
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 09:38:59 PM AEST
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None of us ever are too old to need or want love even though sometimes it brings heartache. Beautiful write, June.
Rita |
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Re: The Love That Went Wrong
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by wolfwynd on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 07:03:28 AM AEST
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| great poem - full of emotion and sadness - very well written - in a way I've been there... many times xxx |
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Re: The Love That Went Wrong
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by critterhideaway on
Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 04:03:52 PM AEST
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| This is beautiful! I can relate to the feelings . |
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