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A New Mourning
Contributed by
Mortis-Dark
on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 07:28:59 PM in AEST
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The sun fades into the shallow bay.
Our hopes and dreams drown with it.
The moon looms over the mountins peak.
Its slient soft rays beam on what once was.
A fable a tale of hope.
A tall tale a small tale.
A hope for a new begining.
For all that was lost will weave back again.
Back to an age of man quite forgotten.
The old tales will be retold.
The land will take all the glory.
We will reep what we grow.
For this is the end.
The end of all things we know.
A new faith.
A New Mourning.
Copyright ©
Mortis-Dark
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2004-06-16 19:28:59]
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Re: A New Mourning
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 07:49:34 PM AEST
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interesting, glad to see you posting again too! hugs n' love nessa
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Re: A New Mourning
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by Luinil on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 08:24:45 PM AEST
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| beautiful and very touching... great write!* |
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Re: A New Mourning
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 10:01:09 PM AEST
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| nice write, sadness, drips from this fable, liked it, keep on writing |
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Re: A New Mourning
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by pixie on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 06:21:57 AM AEST
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by the looks of things you haven't lost your touch this was great,
pixie xx |
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