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Untitled
Contributed by
wolfwynd
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Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 07:05:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The thoughts, anger, frustration swim inside my head,
Begging for the release that only you can give me,
I need your touch, your smile, your kiss,
The actions that tell me your mine and mine only.
Trying to make sense of everything, and failing miserably,
What can I do to make things better?
What can I do to make things right, as they once were,
And may never be again.
My love for you is engraved deep inside my love,
I’ll never be able to convey just how much you mean to me,
I can write poems, sonnets, stories, I can tell you, but it’ll never be enough,
I love you.
I need to help, make things alright,
Put your soul in tune with mine again,
Put your self at peace and your hand in mine,
I need you.
I keep my intentions cloaked, my feelings hidden,
As I have always done and will continue,
Only you see through me like a pane of glass,
From you I cannot hide.
My love for you is as deep as the sea,
As strong and solid as the mountains above,
But how long before it crumbles,
And I am left alone?
My head is hurting, my eyes are sore,
My patience is wearing thin,
Yet with every breath I love you more and more,
And with each and every passing day…
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wolfwynd
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2004-06-16 19:05:29]
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Re: Untitled
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by luckycharm on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 07:11:10 PM AEST
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| I think that this was the best poem I have read today. Keep up the good work. You are a great writer.-luckycharm. |
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Re: Untitled
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by pixie on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 06:20:12 AM AEST
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it's awful when you go through a bad patch with the one you love, i know how you must have felt at the time, as I have been there in the past...good expression
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Re: Untitled
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by holderofthestone on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 11:59:58 AM AEST
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a gripping piece. I can relate with you on this one. -
My love for you is as deep as the sea,
As strong and solid as the mountains above,
But how long before it crumbles,
And I am left alone?- these lines called out to me. another great poem wolf. A++++
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