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The Cricket
Contributed by
TheNextRobertFrost
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Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 04:47:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I saw a cricket in the grass strumming his insrument, playing his song.
Cirping a tune that isn't a tune, but soft sweet notes.
I got out my harmonica and started to play along.
He didn't do anything else for his song to which he devotes,
playing playing those soft, sweet jumbled notes.
And we played and we played, and played all day ,
O, but if I could, I would take opportunity and stay.
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Re: The Cricket
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 04:59:10 PM AEST
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cute:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: The Cricket
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 05:03:18 PM AEST
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Your screen name -- so much to live up to -
Nice cute poem - I liked the effort |
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Re: The Cricket
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by Archie on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 05:21:37 PM AEST
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On line 2 you misspelled he word chirping
This is a good write. |
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Re: The Cricket
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 05:25:17 PM AEST
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| yes another lovely poem. |
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Re: The Cricket
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by yellow_sundragon on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 05:36:27 PM AEST
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You do indeed have alot to live up to if you want to be the next Robert Frost....
light hearted and cute, just lovely. |
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