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Fate
Contributed by
XxJesxXx420xX
on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 04:37:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Death comes unexpected
it takes you away
And soon you'll know it
you won't see the next day
Desired by death
you turn to stone
Feeling lost
you are alone
All devoured
in death's presence
Suffering in pain
you are sentenced
Now stuck for eternity
in a place of doom
You've already started your fate
now there's nothing left to do
Copyright ©
XxJesxXx420xX
... [
2004-06-16 16:37:02]
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Re: Fate
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by luckycharm on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 04:42:44 PM AEST
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| This poem was so sad. I don't really know how you feel, but I hope that you feel better.-luckycharm. |
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Re: Fate
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 05:06:16 PM AEST
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| excellent write. too true. |
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Re: Fate
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by purplestary on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 05:26:04 PM AEST
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| so verry true. this is a great write. i loved this alot. |
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Re: Fate
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by yellow_sundragon on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 05:38:12 PM AEST
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| Hmm... kinda plays off the "everybody's gotta die sometimes" theme... great write... |
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Re: Fate
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by pixie on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 06:10:30 AM AEST
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great write,
pixie xx |
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