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afternoon observation
Contributed by
merry
on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 03:57:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Serenity is a breeze off the lake
Wafting on sunshine, dappled through treetops
Diamonds dance on the water
Conversation flows like wine
Perfectly content to be here
Colorful array of people come and go
There is truth in their faces
Nothing hypocritical in their stances
This is who we are…the locals
Old hippies in worn out jeans
Long gray ponytails on the men
Something about that makes me smile
As if struggling to hold onto youth at all costs
Everybody moved out to the country it seems
And on this perfect afternoon they congregate
By the lake for a cold beer and a smoke
The sun winks and smiles at such rightness
Copyright ©
merry
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2004-06-16 15:57:57]
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Re: afternoon observation
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by Stitch on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 04:03:41 PM AEST
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What a comfortable picture. I can smell the tobacco...feel the breeze...see the motorcycles.... Are there motorcycles? No matter. I see them anyway.
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Re: afternoon observation
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 04:05:35 PM AEST
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ohhh! this is beautiful gaille, hehe, made me smile:) as always written with style and charm, hugs n' loves ya sis, nessa
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Re: afternoon observation
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 04:55:03 PM AEST
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| yes, it was a lovely afternoon. =]] |
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Re: afternoon observation
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by pixie on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 09:10:10 AM AEST
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you took us there on your journey, great write
pixie xx |
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