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What it is
Contributed by
trippflip
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Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 03:56:35 PM in AEST
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Lifepoems
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Reality is like looking through a telescope. You can focus, unfocus, learn, and stare off into space. At times things are clear, but they can become abstract. Sometimes you see something you want, but it's too far away for you to have so you admire from a distance. Then you can see something horrible come your way, like an asteroid. But when you stop looking throught this telescope you can see more sides of the story; the full picture. Then you can understand everything and go on with what you saw down inside the tunnel of you mind where you will reside with your experiances of life. So once you lose reality you'll know what it really is other than a telescope.
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Re: What it is
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 04:59:10 PM AEST
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| very interesting point of view. and nice metaphors. |
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Re: What it is
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 11:41:26 PM AEST
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hah, I must agree with the first comment very interesting metaphors...I liked this one a lot too keep it up please, I think you have talent...
much love,
Dani |
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