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A Beautiful Surprise
Contributed by
pyrofungus
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Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 03:52:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Follow me
Down the hill we go
Through the trees
Into the water
Here put this blind fold over your eyes!
I have a surprise for you!
Now turn around!
Bang! Bang!
Oopsie I didn’t mean to shoot you in the head!
It was an accident
I’ll try to revive you myself
Hey maybe being in the water will help you heal
I’ll just sit on the shore and watch you “heal”
Watch as the clear water turns crimson
How beautiful
I love it
Such a nice piece of art!
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pyrofungus
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2004-06-16 15:52:03]
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Re: A Beautiful Surprise
(User Rating: 1 )
by Colleen on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 07:38:30 PM AEST
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| Well, I must say that this is a very interesting poem. At first you had me going with the whole love idea, haha I guess not. I liked the flow of this poem. It's very original! Nice work! |
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Re: A Beautiful Surprise
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by Heartfilledblood on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 01:54:09 AM AEST
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| Creepy poem. I liked it. Good write :) |
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