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I made the mistake of falling in love

Contributed by Randyjohnson on Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 02:40:07 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

When I was younger I made the mistake of falling in love.
I was only eighteen years old and I knew this girl.
She was five foot five
and when I saw her I came alive.

She was the most beautiful girl that I'd ever seen
and she meant everything to me.
I should've been more honest with her from the start.
Then maybe I wouldn't have gotten a broken heart.

Recitation:
I should've told her how I felt but I'd been hurt before
and this heart of mine couldn't take anymore.
Finally I got up the courage to go to her house and talk to her
but when I got there, she had just eloped.
If I would've been honest with her from the start,
then maybe I wouldn't have gotten a broken heart.
My love for her grew day by day.
Now that I know she's in his arms, the pain just won't go away.
When I think of how I got hurt, I begin to cry
and I just want to curl up and die.
Now I sit at home and drink my whiskey everyday.
Just trying to make the pain go away.
Now they'll be together until they die
and when I think of it, I break down and cry.

Copyright © Randyjohnson ... [ 2004-06-16 14:40:07]
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Re: I made the mistake of falling in love (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 07:19:55 PM AEST
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Very beautiful! I mean in a sad sort of way, but beautiful flow and texture to these words!
Angel always...godspeed...joni

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